tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-299740289548189622.post2468267060457895728..comments2024-03-25T04:31:16.642-07:00Comments on Bella Vista: We'll Just Talk About The MurderPamila Paynehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14398900249578356483noreply@blogger.comBlogger20125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-299740289548189622.post-66109777605475957172010-10-25T10:00:11.335-07:002010-10-25T10:00:11.335-07:00Can't wait to see where this goes. Good on her...Can't wait to see where this goes. Good on her for walking instead of getting into a stranger's car. Says a lot about her, and him.Valeriehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14148970927473800732noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-299740289548189622.post-56348272245878711972010-10-23T22:42:48.989-07:002010-10-23T22:42:48.989-07:00So much to love in this ... Um... Jack Flaps for o...So much to love in this ... Um... Jack Flaps for one ... And yes, please keep us all posted about a collection. I'm first in line.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11413377601369107260noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-299740289548189622.post-50264755987852860912010-10-23T10:34:39.823-07:002010-10-23T10:34:39.823-07:00I think this is my first visit to your stories, bu...I think this is my first visit to your stories, but it will likely not be my last. Nicely done! I also liked that Ruby didn't get in the car. I suspect Belinda is in the trunk?<br /><br />CDCecilia Dominichttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12799727636246434837noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-299740289548189622.post-72200237663728395632010-10-23T10:11:27.601-07:002010-10-23T10:11:27.601-07:00I love Ruby. I'm so glad she didn't get in...I love Ruby. I'm so glad she didn't get in the car.<br /><br />And there's going to be a book? Best news I've heard all day. Count me in!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-299740289548189622.post-34658840023284758612010-10-23T08:59:19.951-07:002010-10-23T08:59:19.951-07:00When I thought of the name, Jack Flap's, it ma...When I thought of the name, Jack Flap's, it made me want to open a diner just so I could call it that. Doubt I'd have much time to write flipping pancakes, though.Pamila Paynehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14398900249578356483noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-299740289548189622.post-13184425908161864602010-10-23T07:04:19.640-07:002010-10-23T07:04:19.640-07:00Another great story; just enough to leave you wond...Another great story; just enough to leave you wondering about a few of the details. Also, Jack Flaps made me laugh :)<br /><br />Kari @ The Best Place By The FireAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-299740289548189622.post-50331784874345279792010-10-23T06:09:11.206-07:002010-10-23T06:09:11.206-07:00I like the dialogue in these stories, and as has a...I like the dialogue in these stories, and as has already been said, Jack Flaps is an absolutely perfect name for the diner. :)Steve Greenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18414279461366098783noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-299740289548189622.post-87498226747746991142010-10-23T04:16:11.132-07:002010-10-23T04:16:11.132-07:00Great atmosphere, and her insistence on walking wa...Great atmosphere, and her insistence on walking was great.Tony Nolandhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15090583562737225942noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-299740289548189622.post-10238355217685686002010-10-22T15:58:37.937-07:002010-10-22T15:58:37.937-07:00Ah, nice to see Ruby again!
Descriptions are per...Ah, nice to see Ruby again! <br /><br />Descriptions are perfect, as always.Icy Sedgwickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11501193571425442406noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-299740289548189622.post-9657970810440966792010-10-22T15:49:38.123-07:002010-10-22T15:49:38.123-07:00Ruby seems to be quite the colorful character. I&#...Ruby seems to be quite the colorful character. I'm interested to see how she handles a sit-down conversation. I'm sure it'll be quite a ride.Eric J. Krausehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05774468607814244185noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-299740289548189622.post-68301377546280686292010-10-22T15:17:13.024-07:002010-10-22T15:17:13.024-07:00Sometimes you just need to talk, desperately. I di...Sometimes you just need to talk, desperately. I dig, Pamila.John Wiswellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07416044628686736927noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-299740289548189622.post-84755325011802809522010-10-22T11:57:08.944-07:002010-10-22T11:57:08.944-07:00Love it. There is so much intensity in this, I wan...Love it. There is so much intensity in this, I wanted more. ;-) Yuo are alraedy 'there' Pamila, We just need to get yuo an agent.<br /><br />Evrey time I come here, I ask myself why i dnt come mre often. Excellent work.Jodi MacArthurhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13373591664178281529noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-299740289548189622.post-31407114335085586262010-10-22T11:45:00.787-07:002010-10-22T11:45:00.787-07:00Great writing again Pamila. The visual effect of y...Great writing again Pamila. The visual effect of your descriptions is immediate and real.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-299740289548189622.post-15398914366631922202010-10-22T11:19:22.836-07:002010-10-22T11:19:22.836-07:00@Harry - I'm treating these as stand alone pie...@Harry - I'm treating these as stand alone pieces. There's no order to them here on the blog, but yes, Ramiel really did get into an accident in one of the other posts. <br />@Paul and @Harry and anyone else who's interested - Yes - I'm working on putting together a new book. Don't know how it will be distributed yet, but it will be set free from my brain come hell or high water.<br />Thanks everyone for your support.Pamila Paynehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14398900249578356483noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-299740289548189622.post-26398562367598523132010-10-22T10:56:25.211-07:002010-10-22T10:56:25.211-07:00Was Ramiel in an actual accident before? I need to...Was Ramiel in an actual accident before? I need to read back some, I can't remember what Ruby & Ramiel were each up to last. Someone really must start paying you to do this so I can hold all these parts in one volume and read it from beginning to end! $$$Harryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09628269009060185397noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-299740289548189622.post-29711204535540603722010-10-22T07:43:39.476-07:002010-10-22T07:43:39.476-07:00Maybe I'm not supposed to, but I just love Rub...Maybe I'm not supposed to, but I just love Ruby, how "in-your-face" she is. <br /><br />I too love the description: "Her coloring made her look like a painted carousel pony in the early morning sunlight." So unique.<br /><br />Another great installment Pamila!Deanna Schrayerhttp://theothersideofdeanna.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-299740289548189622.post-27146549948140157352010-10-22T06:51:39.854-07:002010-10-22T06:51:39.854-07:00I was completely sucked in by this story. I could ...I was completely sucked in by this story. I could see everything - the early morning street, Ruby's messed up lipstick, the agent's car. Fantastic storytelling.Lauritahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03688820247531607677noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-299740289548189622.post-66707886319074099062010-10-22T04:36:37.558-07:002010-10-22T04:36:37.558-07:00Jack Flap's - PERFECT name for a diner!
Ruby&#...Jack Flap's - PERFECT name for a diner!<br />Ruby's a cool customer. But I think Agent Ramiel can take her.<br />You write noir like nobody's business, Pamila.Cathy Olliffe-Websterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12729578896443750402noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-299740289548189622.post-66965470152930865412010-10-22T04:12:24.007-07:002010-10-22T04:12:24.007-07:00Fantastic images and great stirytelling. Any plans...Fantastic images and great stirytelling. Any plans to collect these? Maybe an ebook?Paul D Brazillhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12881642426845398389noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-299740289548189622.post-8074320669223622942010-10-22T03:11:48.491-07:002010-10-22T03:11:48.491-07:00Ruby seems like a smart dame...despite her vices.
...Ruby seems like a smart dame...despite her vices.<br /><br />I loved the line "Her coloring made her look like a painted carousel pony in the early morning sunlight."Alan W. Davidsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17067022519729701245noreply@blogger.com