tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-299740289548189622.post4796891571651218514..comments2024-03-25T04:31:16.642-07:00Comments on Bella Vista: Friday Flash: No Such Thing As A Sweet Easy DealPamila Paynehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14398900249578356483noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-299740289548189622.post-88492415536454553312010-06-13T18:34:08.721-07:002010-06-13T18:34:08.721-07:00This was exciting! Thrilling read, can't wait ...This was exciting! Thrilling read, can't wait to read it all together.pegjethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15255191759031800811noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-299740289548189622.post-57205107376200928812010-06-13T12:07:02.473-07:002010-06-13T12:07:02.473-07:00No pun intended, but that's a gripping opening...No pun intended, but that's a gripping opening. I could hardly breathe. Okay, maybe intended a little, but still -- this is an amazing bit of thrill, Pamila. 100% pure win. I might be a little hooked myself.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-299740289548189622.post-40484104270545398362010-06-12T15:24:41.041-07:002010-06-12T15:24:41.041-07:00Alternative POV for scenes in the novella -- what ...Alternative POV for scenes in the novella -- what and interesting concept for extra content in this new media and social media age of publishing. That's a killer first line btw.Barry J. Northernhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05173472793304574269noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-299740289548189622.post-39928939933032918932010-06-12T09:56:32.151-07:002010-06-12T09:56:32.151-07:00Glad you guys like this one, it's a scene from...Glad you guys like this one, it's a scene from the new novella, but I wrote it from a different POV for friday flash. Mr. Nash, pointing out typos is a mercy. Thanks.Pamila Paynehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14398900249578356483noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-299740289548189622.post-32646084270901561152010-06-12T08:27:27.663-07:002010-06-12T08:27:27.663-07:00Wow, a compelling read, Pamila. That's a treme...Wow, a compelling read, Pamila. That's a tremendously good voice and what's not to love about the narrator and Milky. Well done.Alan W. Davidsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17067022519729701245noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-299740289548189622.post-42234286535811266762010-06-12T04:32:55.948-07:002010-06-12T04:32:55.948-07:00Nicely done.Nicely done.Stephen Blackmoorehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01241134280141088631noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-299740289548189622.post-67679070969940138682010-06-12T04:14:14.311-07:002010-06-12T04:14:14.311-07:00Ah the Bella Vista! Your love for the story and ch...Ah the Bella Vista! Your love for the story and characters really shows. Clean and harrowing. And love the Snowflake angle. great stuff. Peace...Lindahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01110078016784294934noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-299740289548189622.post-88806408535916398532010-06-11T14:30:53.518-07:002010-06-11T14:30:53.518-07:00Can't wait to see where this goes. More to com...Can't wait to see where this goes. More to come, right? Right? Please?Valeriehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14148970927473800732noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-299740289548189622.post-78448720710459217992010-06-11T14:14:57.228-07:002010-06-11T14:14:57.228-07:00Man this was super cool. You really sucked me in, ...Man this was super cool. You really sucked me in, and drug addicts always add some spice to an already tense plot. This was stunning Pamila.Carrie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05093923008179106837noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-299740289548189622.post-19820680164425484932010-06-11T13:44:03.040-07:002010-06-11T13:44:03.040-07:00What a great first paragraph, really hurtles the r...What a great first paragraph, really hurtles the reader into the world, the characters and the situation. the language is great too.<br /><br />One typo - "all my mite" <br /><br />Great stuff<br /><br />marc nashSulci Collectivehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03293833259808943096noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-299740289548189622.post-53141372782413810282010-06-11T10:12:08.568-07:002010-06-11T10:12:08.568-07:00Adult babysitting is one of the few things worse t...Adult babysitting is one of the few things worse than child babysitting. The baby who needs sitting could be any sort of personality. The adult who needs sitting? Usually a few things, though not always as bad as the above.John Wiswellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07416044628686736927noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-299740289548189622.post-9364838304136101602010-06-11T08:35:25.792-07:002010-06-11T08:35:25.792-07:00A 100% hit!A 100% hit!Paul D Brazillhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12881642426845398389noreply@blogger.com